So here it is, the first book review of the year. Exciting, right? I’ve literally just finished reading Twilight, by Stephenie Meyer. If I were editing it, or reading it on Fiction Press, my review would begin something like this: “Prologue is nice, but the last sentence could be reworked to add a bit more suspense and make it more of a cliffhanger. Perhaps “He sauntered forward to kill me,  and his friendly smile drilled fear into my chest.” Throughout the story, you begin many of your sentences with the same word or phrase in succession, and it’s repetitive. (“it was” is one of them.) Also, we should know what…